• jeffw@lemmy.worldM
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    7 months ago

    It’s like the 6th paragraph before they make it relevant….

    It feels good to get things included for free. I used to think including textbooks and other course materials in the cost of college was a good example.

    It’s effective to start an article with an anecdote, but not when the anecdote is so long